My Sonnet Stream of Beauty
Stream runs clean with the beauty of nature. Not knowing the dangers in the future The fish grows the home he once had changes Flutters freely in his favorite house Hopes his home can go back to the way it was No chances of escaping the pollution He does not lose faith in his fair home He feels like a fish out of water now Until the good people of the earth helped him He was no longer in danger in life He was no longer sad in his life He will always love his home like good food As much as humans love breathing oxygen He loves his home no matter what happens |
Struggles |
Some struggles I had with writing this sonnet was getting started. When Ms.Heller was explaining how to write a sonnet and what had to be in our sonnet I felt that I could do it. When it came down to getting started and writing it everything in my mind was gone. When i tried writing just something, one thing on my peice of paper I couldn't. I think my mind wasfocused on exhibition during the time. I was stressed outwiththings going on at school then everything with my brother was alot. When I had the time after school and during class I put my headphones in and got my work done. For this experience I learned that I work way better in a quiet space. Not like in a class room but out side and in a space with noone around so I wont get distracted. I can focus on the task at hand.
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End result |
The end result of my sonnet was very positive. The director of the Eflin Forest really liked my sonnet and puzzle piece for chemistry. And something really sad waws that my own mother couldn't make it to the exhibiton because she had to take my siblings home. She didn't get a chance to read my sonnet or see my puzzle piece or my game that i made. It's okay. She is the best mother I could ever ask for. Someone else grandparents really liked my sonnet also. I feel that it could have been done better but it was hard with the limit of ten syllables each line with fourteen line. Not the best but it's all I got.
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